Great job, but the intensity is a little lacking; it'd be better if there was a little more substance to it. But, ehh, I guess I'm used to intense drop songs, and if I was into this more light stuff, it would be better.
Great job, but the intensity is a little lacking; it'd be better if there was a little more substance to it. But, ehh, I guess I'm used to intense drop songs, and if I was into this more light stuff, it would be better.
I'll keep that in mind, Thanks!
That's nice. Very chill and laid-back.
Thanks!
First impression: DANG. That was good. Like, really good. I'm still listening to it as I'm writing this. The instrument progression, in relation to the piece as a whole, is super solid and well thought-out. The fast piano at about 1:20 just sounds chill and dramatic, then as it fades into the clock and back to the music, I can't think of really anything (as an amateur musician myself) anything you could do to make this better. All in all, great job!
Oh thank you!!
Erm...
Okay, I'm just going to get right into this.
The melody is super repetitive, even though it's nice for like the first ten seconds. I feel like there needs to be some sort of variation, not just in the background. Maybe a key or octave shift, or a variation on the original melody. In summary, it was a respectable attempt but needs some more refining.
Thank you for the feedback!
First thoughts - dang.
The melody really gets your attention right from the get-go and doesn't seem repetitive. The drop, though, was VERY impressive. I personally really like the dirty, wet basses in dubstep drops, so this was even better for me. Overall, really solid song. Nice job!
Thanks man, it's nice to have some feedback, I appreciate it.